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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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Star Child Child of stars like Gemini but one Glittering skys and a trust be gone Subject to Odysseus' will be done Out amongst the hazy twirling song Could it be souless lost but still found Map of the universe not yet drawn Now you too lost on this earth so round Skys of black and oblivion trap Neither safe in void nor on the ground All of this fall and oak tree's sap Star child fly with your mindes own map. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Star child fly with your mindes own map. wow...i love the imagery in this poem...you wrote it so well..  ...thank you much for the read!"Life is not long and boring, |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
dang...i love this one...a couple words misspelled here and there..but it might be intetional so i don't know...overall my response would be...wow me |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great imagery and words were quite written well...i enjoyed this alot and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
WOW! This is fantastic! Definitely one of your better pieces. The descriptions were so wonderful that they just give you the feeling of wanting to read it over and over again. Thanks for such a great read.  ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. Not your best, but still a wonderful post....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Nice poem! I loved it |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Wow dude. That was amazing. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
ooo i liked this! imagery was great. and it was well written! goin to my library! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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