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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
This poem was writen for my best friend We have both been dancing for 12 years but last year we got a new dance teacher and well... she wasn't too nice so while i transferred to a differnt acadamy she stayed with the new teacher She wanted everything to be perfect and this is what happend when compition came around "Look at me!" Don't forget to smile. "Make sure your moves are perfect!" Don't forget to smile. "Perfect posture!" Don't forget to smile. "Is your make-up done?" Don't forget to smile. "Is that a run in your fishnets?!" Don't forget to smile. Your mind is racing, With the lecture she gave. You tripped and fell onstage, And you forgot to smile. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hey interesting poem even tho it was different...i liked it...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i like this. yea i know wut u mean i used to dance too. hated bein on stage. to much pressure. my sis was always betters then me so i always felt insecure. then i just quit lol and i was fine afters that... but im not sayin she should quit or nething like that.tell her to keep her chin up! i loved the last line. think you did well on this. hope your friend is okays. and good luck next year for her and good luck at your new academy  tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
OOOOh I really liked the repitition in this and the last line was sooo great!! I like it alot. Sometimes, you can't always smile.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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*InvisibleTears* New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 2 |
This is a great poem. I am sorry you have been treated like that. No one deserves it. Keep your head up chick. |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hey everyone! thanks so much for welkuming me so nicely im glad i can finally share my talents with people you all are so nice and very talented people thanks for welkuming me into my new home ~HeAvEnS AnGeL~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yep....dancing is an art that is quite hard. I liked the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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