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ShortSexyAngel777 New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 9Louisiana, USA |
hi, im really new at this, i never write, but i started a couple of weeks ago, and i think i really enjoy it. anyways, CwboyAtHeart, AKA Cody, is one of my very good friends, and i showed this to him, and he said i should put it up here, lol, anyways, i dont really expect y'all to read it, but, well, um, there it is. Choice and Chance Nothing ahead of you but the world itself. with it comes choices. chances. the chance to create. but also the choice to destroy. the chance to love. but also the choice to hate. the chance the change the world. but also the choice to hurt it. make the choice. above all, step out on faith. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
As I told you before, Ryn, Awesome poem! Hope you write more... It's great to see you posting on here. Anyway, talk to you later! Luv ya, girl!  - Cody - |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
welcome to passion...and i'm glad you have decided to share with us...i hope you like it here as much as i do...and this poem was a great first post which i enjoyed a lot...thanks for sharing and keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Interesting poem... I like how you alternated between a "chance" and a "choice" as positive and negative things. It was an almost pessimistic view of the world, I didn't appreciate this aspect of it but I did admire the technical portion of the poem. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I'm glad Cody invited you, it's great here. Hope to see you reading, replying and sharing with the rest of us!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 Welcome! I liked this, I hope you keep at it Please check your email for a special greeting! SEA |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
Tis so good to read insightful poetry from the pen of youth. Do some mo!  O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you. Joyce Rogers [This message has been edited by joycerogers (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to Passions!! this is a great piece, and for someone who hasn't been writing much this is incredible. i hope you keep writing and i hope that you stick around so we can all read more of your work. great first post, i look forward to reading more Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done! Welcome to Passions! Very thoughtful of Cody to let you in on our little secret...this being our wonderful haven of poetry! Enjoy it, and post more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I know im a lil late welcoming you but better late then never right!? I enjoyed this poem a lot, short and sweet Very nice job. Keep on writing and keep on posting! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Though I'm late, I still want to welcome you to Passions I'm glad you decided to take his word for it and post this here. You have a talent in writing, so I hope to see more of your work in the future. keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Wilkommen zu Passions I liked the alternating of choice and chance. I think that's what made the poem in my mind. Keepem coming SeanD. "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive poem. We need more people who do step out in faith. Apparently I have a major problem with this myself.  "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! I'm glad Cody persuaded you to post this. This is an amazing first post. I enjoyed the read, and am looking forward to reading more. So keep posting Nice work.--Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
 Welcome to PIP. Great first post! You write well. Keep posting! |
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