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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-18 12:38 PM

swiflty rising
with a melody of sound
a joyous symphony of colours
melding to create
a harmonic mixture
of heavenly bliss
that only God can create
in a sunrise

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"You say i only hear what i want too..."

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-18-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved

Allan Riverwood

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1 posted 2001-05-18 01:07 AM

Hah.... nice touch, Tiffer.

Still I like the title, it's pleasant.
Maybe you should put it in.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

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2 posted 2001-05-18 01:10 AM

this poem was short but had a meaning i enjoyed a lot...thanks for the read...and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
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viginia

3 posted 2001-05-18 12:48 PM

*sigh* nice image, i like this a lot.

i think that you should include the title, i don't think it would hurt anything

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-05-18 05:47 PM

WOw, very beautiful!
I loved this one tiff!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-05-21 09:56 AM

Now, this is perfect as it is
I loved it
~*stands up and applauds*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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