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A Sunrise |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
swiflty rising with a melody of sound a joyous symphony of colours melding to create a harmonic mixture of heavenly bliss that only God can create in a sunrise “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "You say i only hear what i want too..." [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hah.... nice touch, Tiffer.  Still I like the title, it's pleasant.Maybe you should put it in.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this poem was short but had a meaning i enjoyed a lot...thanks for the read...and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
*sigh* nice image, i like this a lot. i think that you should include the title, i don't think it would hurt anythingSometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WOw, very beautiful! I loved this one tiff!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now, this is perfect as it is I loved it ~*stands up and applauds*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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