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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
Nobody's perfect Neither are you so what gives you the right to act the way you do? So what if he's fat? I don't care, maybe I don't like the colour of your hair Me and Dan are a unit we come as a pair so knock him, knock me try if you dare A girl you teased relentlessly for years you calling her "Bendy" ignoring her tears You're a cow Josie You've been one for years but nobody said anything silenced by fear But now someone is and I'll make myself clear; "there's the door Get out of my life... My dear.." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like it's a good thing to be telling this person good-bye!  |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is interesting, but the subject was a little hard for me to follow. Maybe that's just my it's-not-Friday stupidity, but otherwise i liked your structure a lot. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love "you are a cow." I was drinking pepsi when I read that and it visited my nostrils.  Just great work here, but I hope you see how you contradict yourself by criticizing her teasing of people, and then calling her a cow. I'm sure she deserved it, hey, but maybe you should stop the hostility and prove what a good person you are. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hey great job on puuting and expressing yourself in this poem...i enjoyed the read...thanks for sharing it...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
I really liked this, and I hope you can stand up to this person for real and let them know how horrible they are being. I hate people like that. And i love people like you who finally get fed up.I admire your ambition. ~britt~ |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
i just wanted to say in response to Allan Riverwood, that she's relentlessly teased me and my friends for 5 years. i think it's perfectly safe to say that she is a cow and everyone who knows her knows it. sorry to sort of... you know be mean! angel -x- |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I live the cow line.....very flat out....very in your face....take that josie! I enjoyed the poem very much and it's always good to stand strong and stick up for yourself.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You Go Girl I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LoL Acire took the words right out of my mouth!!!! |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
hehe... ditto above. That cow line! Stand up to people like that, and it seems like you're doing a great job of that. Very nice! *One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it. |
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