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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-05-17 03:30 AM

i want to cry.
i have no tears.
i want to scream.
i have no voice.
this is pain

i want to run.
nowhere to run to.
i want to be held.
i have no friends.

i cry.
i scream.
i run.
i am held.
for i know pain.
i have conquered!
Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-05-17 03:35 AM

It is good to see that you conquered this pain. Pain sucks big time.

Keep 'em coming.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-17 03:37 AM

i liked the way you have written this from pain to overcoming process...and thats what all that go thru hope to accomplish...i liked it and thanks for sharing...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-05-17 08:56 AM

This one was really good. It did show a lot of pain, but at least you have overcome it for the most part.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-05-18 02:22 PM

Aww this was so sad!!! ::hugs::

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-19 02:49 PM

very well done! You expressed yourself quite good on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2001-05-21 12:32 PM

the pain i talk bout is the pain from when my bf left me/

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-21 01:23 PM

~*hugs*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2001-05-21 05:24 PM

I like the way that you described pain and, unfortunately, I know the feeling all too well. You did good with this, glad to see that you conquered the pain-I have yet 2.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

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9 posted 2001-05-21 06:31 PM

This is really neat, the shape that the words actually take. Your message is full of depth, as pain merits. Good work.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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