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Teen Poetry #4

Friendship overtime

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-19 03:49 AM

Mixed emotions-
As I view the present,

So much has altered,

The past now-
Remains in the shadows,

Memories have faded-

A sense of strangeness-
Is left uncovered,

Reality settles swiftly,

Dreams were once-
Viewed as links

Hidden signs now visible-

Years have passed-
Since the last recall,

The revenues now depleted,

Fleeting me-
To reality once more.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

1 posted 2001-05-19 09:51 AM

UMMMMMMMMmmmm...WHOA...I've had this feeling before....AWSOME way of descrbing it!

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-05-19 11:26 AM

i liked the format you used in this, that was what drew me in the most. very well written piece, i like this a lot

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-19 04:26 PM

This was great. I really liked this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-21 02:20 AM

awesome poem...great job on this poem...i enjoyed it a lot...thanks for sharing it...hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2001-05-21 05:57 PM

thanks. a love poem is on its way. Thanks for keeping me going albert.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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