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Only my Imagination
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Only my Imagination |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I don't know how much more of this I can take This fire burns my soul The cold chills my heart I don't know how much more of this I can take... No one notices, it's only a game Only my imagination. Quietly, they take over While others turn away. They tear apart all I have. But it's only my imagination. I've lost control I'm out of my mind Silently, I die as I awaken. They've gotten this far But it's only my imagination. It's only a dream An empty illusion Little is possible in this fake world. This haunting reverie So delicate and dark Is only a dream to me Or is it my imagination? |
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Shyan Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 10Canada |
Well, I like realy like your poem. Its great, some of the things I can understand, but not all. But I guess thats the way it is. ANy ways, I dont konw what else to say. So tootles. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
thanks for your comment! I realize that somethings in my poem don't make sense...but...somethings don't make sense till you've been through it. Eh, well...life goes on. I think I just confused myself again...hehe. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i personally felt the emotions in this poem...maybe cuz i related to the words...i enjoyed this a lot and hope to see more...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooh...This is so library material! I am going to read this every single day because I love it that much. I could connect with every single line in this piece! Thank you for such a wonderful read!  ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Excellent job! This poem shows a lot of emotion. This is the first of your that I have read. Keep it up! *~*Amanda*~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. I also like the part on yer info where it says where yer from. I thought it was funny. Anyhow, well done on the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very well done my friend. A lot of emotions are going around in the piece. Excellent read. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was beautifully written. Excellent job on this one hun. Keep on postin  |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great job on the poem, good read well done Zu |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Is it a dream, or an imagination... this question made me ponder very hard for a few seconds. It's going to be echoing in my head for quite some time as well. I'll agree that this is one of the best I have read from you so far. Keep crafting beautiful works for us. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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