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zarina
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since 2001-05-19
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0 posted 2001-05-19 02:50 PM


I don't wanna cry
I wanna be hard
I don't wanna care
I didn't want to fall in love
I didn't want to be hurt like this..

I just want to forget you,
to leave you all behind,
forget that that you exist..
I try, but I can't help it..
Every guy I see reminds me of you
I want you out of mind
I wanna be free

I don't want to hurt myself again..
But now I can't help crying
And I can't blame you or anyone,
cause it's all my fault..
I was the one who felt in love whit you

I can't anything, but cry..
I wanted to be strong, but now I feel so weak..
How could I be so childish and naiv?
How could I be so blind, why didn't I see?
Now I know it so well..
You will never love me

this is a poem I wrote for.. well.. this guy I once knew.. He's all gone now.
Excuse my bad english, Im from norway and Im not really good, so there may be some typos.

© Copyright 2001 zarina - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 2001-05-19 05:13 PM


This was great Zarina!
welcome to passions!

youll like it here! hope to see u posting!

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

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2 posted 2001-05-19 05:23 PM


Wow this was a great first post....your english is wonderful, don't you worry!
Welcome to Passions....enjoy your stay!

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I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-05-19 06:06 PM


Welcome to Passions!!! This was a great first post, and I can tell ya I've been there, ask anyone here that knows me!!  

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

banburycross
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viginia
4 posted 2001-05-20 02:48 PM


Welcome to Passions!!  this is a wonderful first post, and your english is fine.  i enjoyed this piece a lot.  i hope you decide to stay here for a while and keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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5 posted 2001-05-20 03:45 PM


Hello thar and welcome to Passions! Loved the first post....Norway, awesome.   Enjoy yourself here.  
  ~Carly

"I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage

DancinQueen
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6 posted 2001-05-20 04:56 PM


Hey im part Norwegian!!   Awesome first post..i know what you've gone through..keep posting!

*dq

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7 posted 2001-05-20 11:10 PM


awesome first post...i enoyed it much and welcome to passions...hope u like it here and stay for a looooooooooooong time ...keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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8 posted 2001-05-22 06:57 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Your english is excused.  It's actually perfect except for a little spelling errors.  Just small things    Emotional poem, you did good on this piece.  Hope to see more of your work.  Enjoy  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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