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Love Hurts |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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I don't wanna cry I wanna be hard I don't wanna care I didn't want to fall in love I didn't want to be hurt like this.. I just want to forget you, to leave you all behind, forget that that you exist.. I try, but I can't help it.. Every guy I see reminds me of you I want you out of mind I wanna be free I don't want to hurt myself again.. But now I can't help crying And I can't blame you or anyone, cause it's all my fault.. I was the one who felt in love whit you I can't anything, but cry.. I wanted to be strong, but now I feel so weak.. How could I be so childish and naiv? How could I be so blind, why didn't I see? Now I know it so well.. You will never love me this is a poem I wrote for.. well.. this guy I once knew.. He's all gone now. Excuse my bad english, Im from norway and Im not really good, so there may be some typos. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great Zarina! welcome to passions! youll like it here! hope to see u posting! Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was a great first post....your english is wonderful, don't you worry! Welcome to Passions....enjoy your stay! Check your mail for a special message! Dopey_Dope/Moderator  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Welcome to Passions!!! This was a great first post, and I can tell ya I've been there, ask anyone here that knows me!!  Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to Passions!! this is a wonderful first post, and your english is fine. i enjoyed this piece a lot. i hope you decide to stay here for a while and keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hello thar and welcome to Passions! Loved the first post....Norway, awesome. Enjoy yourself here. ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey im part Norwegian!! Awesome first post..i know what you've gone through..keep posting!*dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome first post...i enoyed it much and welcome to passions...hope u like it here and stay for a looooooooooooong time  ...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Your english is excused. It's actually perfect except for a little spelling errors. Just small things Emotional poem, you did good on this piece. Hope to see more of your work. Enjoy "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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