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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
forethought: as babies come into the world, we should hold up a sign that says "hold on! youre in for the ride of youre life!" -=realization=- suddenly, in a split second of unconcious thought it hit me. was it, perhaps, because of the music? or, maybe, just the air. i dont know. it just got me. turned me around and slapped me. YOU ARE NOT WHOLE YOU ARE VACANT my endless illusions of man with wings my forbidden thoughts of train in leave. all gone in a second. where did it all go? I AM NOT WHOLE I AM VACANT who would have thought? San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
My quickly rising realization... I am not me I am not anything but the air I breathe The food I consume I am vacant as you say you are not whole A realization that life isn't always what it seems to be and yet, isn't what it doesn't seem to be so what is it? Why are we what we are? And why must you always make me think San??  I loved your piece. and your forethoughts are always helpful. Thanks so much for making me think beyond my stubbornness.  Best wishes...happy writing...~*~Jessica~*~< !signature-->*the expected escape is only a portal to true devine Hell...leave that door alone* [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
for the first time i have to congratulate somebody for a wonderfull poem in a post I started. haha. great Star! Star, reasoning and laughter are the things that separate us from apes, what can i say i like to make people exercise their minds... speaking of apes, sorry for the picture. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahaha, you're still not forgiven considering your ape pic is still up there!! Too bad you had this realization. I realized it a while ago myself. Not too good, i'll tell you that. The poem.....nice one.....but not as good as others.....YOU get over it!hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
lol San, you said it, not me...wanna banana? jk bro, only kidding your actually quite handsome... oops jkYour poems fill me with mysteriousness as i read.. but only a few replies quickly allow me to understand.. great job... ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this poem was awesome!!!! |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
well this was a just a grat opening for me this is what is true. and jsut keep posting and hope you find your way that is the key right now. at least for me well just poem keep posting. ~Matt~ ~ya that is my real name~  somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I guess we look at ourselves and find ourselves empty Why we're never content with being just alive i don't know great poem San I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Well San, I think I'm too young to understand. Maybe I'm not meant to know what its like to feel empty yet, maybe I'll never know. The poem was truly great, and you expressed this occurance well. Maybe in a few years I'll come back to this and say, "Duh! We are vacant! Not whole! Vacant! No one! I get it, I get it!" But for now, I'll just say you're cool. ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey look, it only took two years. |
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