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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Shattering in the dark Walls of glass Falling to the grass Bloody night of cries Screaming in the fear Walls of glass Falling to the grass Icy night of death Burning in the black Walls of glass Falling to the grass Smokey night of glass Sorrowed fall of people Walls of glass Falling to the grass -------------------------------------------------- Just a poem to signal my return. Been going through a bunch of junk, coupled with writer's block. This one's to honor the Night of Broken Glass. -Kosetsu "No one holds command over me. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really a neat poem....kinda dark, but good  SEA |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
very cool dark imagery here, i like this a lot. the repitition in this is cool too, excellent writing. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is an interesting subject to write poetry about, and i think you addressed it very well. Keep posting! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed the imagery you have used in this poem...it worked very well... graet job...and thanks for the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooo this is a good one. Such symbolism in a short piece is always great to read. Well done! ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow kosetsu great poem, I think that you did very well to capture the terror and atmosphere of the Night of Broken Glass well done. Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I like it, but i really didn't fancy the repetition or the way it was used here. I thought there should have been more to the poem. Oh well....you did ok on this one. Welcome back.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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