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Insomnia Insignia |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Five more minutes, snooze. And i unknowingly sleep through lunch, Oprah, and my imaginary sense of high school. I don't mind the super religious. Only if they superimpose. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost [This message has been edited by obscurity of cloud (edited 05-13-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
short but nice...good job...and thanks for the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
hah i liked this! can sooooooo relate i slept most of me high skool years away but o wells....i felt this also had a lil read between the lines message....could be wrong and its just me thinking that cuz im a wierdo but o well. i likeds it muchs! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Haha yeah this rocked.  ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
hee hee, i really liked the last thought in this, i thought that was very clever. you did a good job on this, i like it a lot. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
interesting thoughts keep sharing thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Liked this alot thanx for the read Marshal Zu |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was cool. It was different from what you usually read and that made it more interesting. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
short and yet oh so true i know that well i never sleep except during school i mean y not they even have ppl puting you to sleep there heh ben i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Silver Butterfly Junior Member
since 2001-03-13
Posts 42Between here and the end |
Yay! Good job! I really like the line "and my imaginary sense of high school". Okay, well... that's all I have to say. Ciao |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I liked this one. I am having no problem getting to sleep at school, just at night! *~*Amanda*~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not my fav, but still quite interesting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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