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Teen Poetry #4

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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-16 04:26 PM

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banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-05-16 05:41 PM

i'm replying again and telling you again that it is still good

keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-17 02:11 AM

hey...i liked how you wrote this...and it sinteresting that you write poems from quotes you find...anyways....i enjoye this alot...hope to see more...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

~*brittt*~
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since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-05-18 08:39 AM

I can definetly relate to this poem It's really sweet, and you put alot of emotion into it. Whoever the guy is probably didn't deserve you anyway. I really liked this so keep up the good work hun.
~britt~

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