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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
a creature of habit everything always the same a routine set for life a life as a schedule everything always the same nothing to make new waves everyday smooth as glass not even a tiny ripple nothing to make new waves nothing to change the course of everything always the same a routine set for life nothing to change the course stagnation begins to form you dont even notice the change your to set in your ways stagnation begins to form killing all in sight everyday creeping closer to you you dont even see it behind you killing all in sight stagnation changes your life your routine set for life now a pool of waves stagnation changes your life tossed boulders into your same caused tidal waves of change a tsunami that changed everything “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Another great poem Tiff, I really liked the repitition that used with the lines "everything always the same" and "a routine set for life". Anyway good job on the poem. Mr mr Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
the way you wrote this is very cool, this is a very interesting read. i liked the descriptions in this too, you did a good job with that. good poem, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like this one, great job on it  "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem...i thought you did a very good job...and keep writing tiff...i enjoyed this poem...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
I gotta print this one........... sounds like my life I'm sorry to say.... Good one Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one....not my fav, but still a good one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Not bad Tiff. I don't think this is as expressive as your other poems. All in all a good read though. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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