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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-05-15 10:10 AM


Me Is All I Can Be.
I don't think i'm popular.
I care bout nothing trendy.
I am me and that is all i can be.

I like to hyper.
I like to be punk.
I am original.
I am me and that is all i can be.

My friends help me to be who i am.
Encouragement to be me comes from friends.
They tell me "I wanna be like you!"
I don't feel special cuz they ain't me.
I am me and that's all i can be.

Believe in yourself.
You are original.
You are you and that's all you can be!


© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-15 10:12 AM


wow robin that was awesome you have a super talent.  and i really love the message ya know. i mean just look at my signiture  and welcome to passions i know you will ove it here as i do

BE ORIGINAL!!!!!!!!!


i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-15-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-05-15 10:24 AM


Welcome to Passions   I hope you enjoy your time her and have fun sharing your poetry. Good job on the poem, I thought it was great and a very good first post  
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3 posted 2001-05-15 10:27 AM


This poem was actually pretty inspiring. I loved it. Keep up the good work!
~britt~

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4 posted 2001-05-15 11:13 AM


  Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting!    SEA
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5 posted 2001-05-15 11:33 AM


this was some good stuff...nice work.

Welcome to passions!!!   
Regina

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To say these words to you"bon jovi

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6 posted 2001-05-15 11:37 AM


This was really cute, and I'm glad that you were so full of inspiration and hope!!  Great job, I wish I could feel as confident about myself as you are.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

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7 posted 2001-05-15 12:42 PM


very good job on the poem...the message in this one was a inspiring one...i liked it and also...welcome to passions ...and this was a great first post...keep writing...posting and replying...cya~... ...?

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8 posted 2001-05-15 01:54 PM


Welcome to passions!@!

great first post, i really liked the positive mood of this, this poem made me smile    i know you'll love it here, keep sharing all your work with us.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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9 posted 2001-05-15 04:37 PM


YEAH!   Loved it. Welcome to Passions.
  ~Carly

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10 posted 2001-05-18 05:12 PM


Welcome to Passions!
I agree with everything said in the poem. I hope to read more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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11 posted 2001-05-21 09:28 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

You have showed us such inner strength thru your poem.  Amazing.  I do agree with what you've said in this outstanding write.  Happy posting and reading as well.  Again, welcome to our family here in PIP.

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

zarina
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12 posted 2001-05-21 10:50 AM


I liked this poem very much! always be yourself..  
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13 posted 2001-05-21 11:49 AM


I liked this poem , it was really well writen. On another note, WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
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14 posted 2001-05-21 04:07 PM


great first post   Welcome to Passion's

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15 posted 2001-06-04 03:11 AM


tks all for the welcome!
robin

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