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“A Story of Love”
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“A Story of Love” |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“A Story of Love” Beneath the starry heavens I heard a cry Within my soul Screaming for one For one like you I searched earth as far as the eye could see But alas, I was unable to find the one I sought I waited, killing my emotion with each passing day Thinking one such as you would never come my way But that proved wrong The day I saw you I longed to hold you close And set to change my ways For you Over time I did what I promised I changed more and more with each day Dreaming of you each and every night Thinking of the day that I would be able to hold you tight Then that day I say you again I joked and played Like a normal person would Then in playing I did the unexpected And pulled you close to me Happier then I’d ever been Knowing what love was like I now had a reason to go on every day For my dream had come true, because I was finally with you Then you went away And left me all alone Without one goodbye I sit here only to wonder why true sorrow showing through the madness that engulfs on the edge of my sanity I hear your voice only an illusion, cast by my oh so broken heart I don’t know what to do I keep one wishing upon the stars But they refuse to grant my wishes Though my soul cries My wishes are for you It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad...but written so well....i liked this one...great poem...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really sad, I felt the longing in this piece and that's kinda what made it so good. Just remember what they say "It's better to have lived and loved than to have never loved at all." You are lucky to have loved.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
you did a beautiful job expressing yourself in this piece, i really like the feeling you put into it. beautiful writing, keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You are a sucker for love aren't you? Yep yep....yer just like me.....I been through it all......mutual love....unrequited love...pain...heartbreak.....b la bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla and more BLA.... anyway....i really enjoyed the poem. nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ouch!!! this is a very touching poem. You did really good on this piece. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ouch!!! this is a very touching poem. You did really good on this piece. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
*heart stops beating* *heart starts again* Oh, there it goes again... I really really REALLY thought this was extremely well done. Wow. Like acire said...Ouch. Except mine's bigger. Great read. Thank you. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
*heart stops beating* *heart starts again* Oh, there it goes again... I really really REALLY thought this was extremely well done. Wow. Like acire said...Ouch. Except mine's bigger. Great read. Thank you. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
*heart stops beating* *heart starts again* Oh, there it goes again... I really really REALLY thought this was extremely well done. Wow. Like acire said...Ouch. Except mine's bigger. Great read. Thank you. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Augh. i hit the button twice. They should warn us about these things... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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