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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-05-14 04:08 PM

The moon shines bright
in the blue velvet sky
as stars twinkle and glitter,
like little diamonds...
The light of the great celestial orb
reflects off the dark water,
rippling, as gentle waves caress the shore,
and I smile to myself...
I am wearing his tuxedo jacket
over my gorgeous dress,
made for a princess.
He has his arm around me
to protect me from the chilly seabreeze.
All alone by the vast, phenomenal sea,
we find a bench to sit on.
He smiles and gazes at me,
with sparkling pale blue eyes
that put the blue of the sky to shame.
He pushes a strand of hair
out of my face as he leans in closer.
He softly kisses one cheek,
and then the other...
and his whispers are like music.
He asks me to be his girlfriend
and I nod, as I smile and blush.
Our soft lips unite in perfect bliss...
The kiss-- the moment--
leaves me breathless...
And when our lips finally part
from their sweet, sweet union,
we look into one another’s eyes
and share a smile, as I rest my head
on his strong shoulder and sigh.
It is then when I yawn
and sit up in bed, a frown upon my lips.
Once again, it was just a dream.
It’s ALWAYS just a dream...

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

[This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 05-14-2001).]

XFalloutX
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

1 posted 2001-05-14 04:16 PM

Hey I liked your poem it was really good

But why does it always have to be a dream?

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-05-14 04:17 PM

Your last line made me sad....

I guess somethings will only seem like a dream...ummmmi forgot the rest of my sentence....lol

This was amzing work!

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-14 05:22 PM

i liekd it and how you discribed this poem even tho...it was sad at the end...good job and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-05-14 06:08 PM

Oooh I was so happy 4 u, and the ending really disappointed me!! I hate those kinda dreams! Well I love em, but I hate the fact that they're always only dreams. You go out there and make your dreams come true, and this piece is going into my library.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

5 posted 2001-05-14 06:25 PM

This was sweet. Personally I'de rather have a bad dream rather than a good dream. Bad dreams go away, good dreams haunt you like the ghost of things never to be. Does that make any sense? Lol. Anyway, good writing.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-05-14 06:45 PM

I like this very much.....what a beautiful dream

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

7 posted 2001-05-14 07:30 PM

I wish my dreams were that beautiful. This poem was wonderfully written. Keep it up!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

8 posted 2001-05-14 10:59 PM

I liked this one.

But could it be a dream that you actually dream while you're awake? Meaning having reality seem as a dream.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-05-18 05:09 PM

STOP DREAMING ABOUT ME YOU STALKER!!!!!!!!
GEEEEESSSSHHHHH!!!!!

Haha....i LOVED this poem. You did so amazingly well on this. It's awesome. Your descriptions of love are beautiful. I really liked this poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

10 posted 2001-05-18 09:30 PM

Hey gurlie, this was amazing and i know how it feels to only have dreams like that. Only mine are more like "what would i do if i could re-live one event..." and those suck cuz they always turn out better and you wish you could do it. much like this dream... *L* but we'll get over our singleness feeling... cuz u got brett and i got... well how about YOU will get over that singleness feeling hahahaha

great job!! mos def goin in da lib yo LOL

Love
Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-05-21 11:33 AM

Dopey is dreaming again

Sara, this is a beautiful read. One of your best, well at least one of my favorites of yours. ~*applauds*~
You are a good story teller.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

12 posted 2001-05-21 11:35 AM

Hey,

Oh this is very very nice I enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing it brightend my day

Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

13 posted 2001-05-21 11:36 AM

Wow this was great, you showed many feelings in this and I enjoyed it. Keep righting.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."
~Anonymous

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