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broken wing Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 37 |
unspoken words but i know the look that look u give me the way you look at me the way you touch me the way you smile at me i know them all enprinted on to my brain each and everything you do a loving look a sweet caress a gentle smile you know everything every swell, every curve, every expression just like i know everything everything about you "To me, fair friend, u never can be old, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this poemn...nice job and keep writing...broken...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i like the feeling and the tone of this a lot, this is a really nice piece. keep postingall your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem I really enjoyed the read.  Mr mr Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I found this one to be really really sweet and I liked it alot. Great job. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I really liked this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I lke it a lot. very expressive poem. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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