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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Baby crying in his mothers arms Holding and carressing him from harm She sofly lays him upon his tiny bed And gently kisses his fragile little head Tears slowly form at the corners of her eyes As she sings him a lullaby Her heart swells up with unmeasurable joy Thanking God, for blessing her with a healthly baby boy Often she wonders how she'll ever make it thru But all is forgotten as she stares deep within his innocent eyes of blue She slowly proceeds out of his room Closes the door, and creeps into her own bedroom She stares at her empty bed Reluctant at times to crawl in But all is forgotten as she says her prayers As she slowly pulls her covers close to her head And whispers out "Only God knows why I'm able with every strength in my soul, To how I'm able to ever let go, But I must for my precious baby And who knows just maybe time will heal all pain And I'll hear him once again calling out my name.." "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
great poem. I liked it. keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
that's really sweet, I almost cried  I hope to read more from you soon. *s* Stace |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
This is amazing! I can truly feel this woman's pain...that is why you write so well! Great job! God Bless and Keep Smiling  Stacey P.S.- lol look! Two "staceys" posting in the same one...small world! hehe The only thing that counts is faith expressing itself through love. ~Gal. 5:6 |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...i liked how you've discribed everything and putted them in such words i enjoyed it throughout...thanks for the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Elusive^ Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 18dancing fairy land |
emotion just seeps from the words..I like it..kind of reminds me of my baby cousin..very insightful..keep posting 'there was nothing to fear and nothing to doubt..'''I'll TAKE a QUIET life..a HANDSHAKE of CARBON monoxide with NO alarms AND no SURPRISES..'' |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done! Wow, I really thought you kicked some serious booty on this one. Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
WOW!! I think this is the first of your work that I've read, but I most definitely hope to read more. This was really great, awesome images I really felt this one. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well done great poem, I enjoyed the read thanks for sharing Mr Mr Zu |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Outstanding work! This reaked of awesomeness and emotion. I really really enjoyed it. Quite tragic... romantic, even. I love this one a lot, one of the best I've seen by you for sure, Kris. Keep up the awesome work. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wow!!! I've loved your poems lately and I'd like for you to share more. Keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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