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In my arms. Only a dream?
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In my arms. Only a dream? |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
She's the love of my life She means every thing to me To hold her in my arms Only a dream To hold her in my arms I would never let go I would never let her fall But it's just a dream in my head I'm driving my self to the edge I bring myself down I lock myself up Cutting the rest of the world off The images of her running through my head To hold her in my arms Only a dream To hold her in my arms I would never let her go I would never let her fall....... |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
it's great pat, but I still think you should let me beat her up. I don't like her...and I don't even know her!!!  *s* Stace [This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 05-13-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to Passions!! this is a dreat first post, it has a lot in it and took a while for me to absorb. great writing, i know you'll love it here and i look forward to reading more of your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This has a great lyrical quality. Great first post, i hope you share more! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoye dthe reda a lot...and welcome to passions this is a great first pots...hope to see more...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
First of all, welcome to passions. Youre going to like it beaucoup. Now the poem was a very good first post. Well i hope to see more. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting! SEA |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to passions, I enjoyed the read and it was a good first post. Mr Mr Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
OOooh I really liked this one alot, especially how you ended the poem on such a sad note. It was great, and I hope that your dreams come true!! Welcome To Passions! Hope to see more posts like this one. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this first post...awaiting the next. ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Welcome to passions! Wonderful first post! I hope you decide to post more.. I'm looking forward to reading more from you  Sarah *love is blind; friendship closes its eyes.* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions! Good job on your first post here, I hope you enjoy the forums "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite well on this one! I really enjoyed it! Welcome to passions!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Omg this relates so much to my boyfriend while we were still bestfriends...he did exactly what you described in the poem..he cut himself off from the world..he got so depressed it scared me half to death and just transformed into this whole different person because of this one girl..im glad those days are over and i hope that you keep your feet on the ground!! Great first post hun! |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS this is a great first post *KiMMie* |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS! This is a really good first post, I look forward to seeing more from ya   ,Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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