Teen Poetry #4 |
Dad |
Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
* If * I could bring you down from Heaven it would be today because it's Mother's Day and you need to be here with all of us buying mom flowers and a card Everyone would go to chruch and listen to the pastor then you, mom, Suvi, Maiju would have a snack call me on the cell "we are on our way home" I'd be waiting by the computer for the purple van as it pulled into the yard Lucy would come running to it because she knows there are happy people Then probably eat and give mom our cards you could give her your gift that would be love, flowers and a really nice card But that's our job now I love you dad alot! © Minna May 13, 2001 |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful tribute to your father's memory. These memories are what keep him alive for you, and I'm that that you are sharing them with us. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is really sweet. Thank you for sharing this with everyone; it shows a true compassion in you. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This is well written. I'm sorry you cant be with your dad, but he is with you. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work, Minna! Be sure to preserve your father's memory by always showing your mother that you love her. Keep on truckin'. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet and definily a nice tribute...thanks for sharing...great job on writing this i liekd it... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this Minna....a lot of emotion expressed. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna --- you simply amaze me. You're one awesome girl. Be strong okies I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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