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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Talked to you on the phone last night, told you my adventures for the day, told you what happened at school, and home, and you listened like you always do. Told you how the doctors made me give blood, when I didn't want to, and how much it hurt, because I'm terrified of needles and blood combined, and you didn't know that. Told you how I can hardly walk because I wanted to save a friend, and instead I got pulled across the floor and over books and chairs, I told you loads and loads of things, and you told me nothing about you, but that's the way it always is. And I'm used to it. This is just my little rant. I know it sucks, so please don't say that. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Are you ok? What's the story behind this poem? You have me worried now... please tell us what happened. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
OK, the eyebrows are risen...It doesn't suck at all. It always helps to rant and get everything out. One part that really caught the attention was "and instead I got pulled across the floor and over books and chairs." This doesn't sound too friendly. Hope you keep on smiling and if you're not, talk to someone. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this certainly doesn't such. it was written as a rant and it expresses your feelings beautifully and it is very heartfelt. i hope everything is ok and that things get better for you. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Allan, okay, on tues. two boys in my class got in a fight in English. Since I'm bigger than one of them and stronger than one of them, I jumped on the smaller one's arm. Because I was sitting down in my chair, I got pulled off of my chair because I could only catch him with one arm. They also pulled me across the floor and through books and things. That messed up my knee. Then yesterday I went to the doctor's and they decided they wanted blood to test me for high cholestorol, and blood and needles together scare me VERY VERY MUCH. I was laughing and crying at the same time and I couldn't breathe the way they wanted me to. Anyways, I talked to Justin last night and told him about all this and this rant is just about how I want him to tell me about him and where his father is and all this because the only way I can get him to tell me anything is by asking him the same question over and over again until I annoy him. Anyhow, byes. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa --- why bother yourself with such small details. Maybe he just wanted to be all ears for you that night. Don't be too bothered by such thing okies  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea...leave little things pass...there too much in our lives to be worried about smaller things also..anyways..this poem was nice...and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks acire, and albert?. Ya all are great. Everything's just OKAY now. So PEACHY!!!! I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You are very welcome Asylla "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done Allysa, you shouldn't be getting into petty fights, but hey.... anyway i enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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