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Boy So Lonely
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Boy So Lonely |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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This is a poem that I wrote partly about myself, and partly about some people who I have noticed at school... I have felt a lot like the boy mentioned in this poem quite often... Luckily I have realized all that I have, and have changed so that this poem fortunately doesn't tell of my fate.  BOY SO LONELY He's the kid that You always pass by He always seems to be sad And you don't know why He's the one that Always feels so blue Nobody ever bothers to say hi The boy nobody ever knew The one that nobody liked Though they never even tried Nobody was there to hold him All those nights that he cried He's the one that's in the corner Trying to keep away from the crowd He was only his own best friend Close friends he was not endowed The boy that noone likes Has commited suicide... Maybe if someone loved him He may not have died His mother and father Visited him only Soon their lives moved on And he was left a boy so lonely - Cody - Living From Memories Living From Thoughts There Are Some Things In Live That Cannot Be Taught [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was REALLY good...I have noticed people like that, and have actually felt like that...you depict it SOOOOO well...I feel like crying now!!! Keep writing!!! Lotsa Love, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad..and i'm worried if my situation..turns out like that..evne tho..i have always people around..me i still feel alone..you have put the meaningbto my heart...keepw riting..  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was really good work. I hope you wont feel alone here....cuz i think we all say "hi". This was very powerful. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i liked this alot! so sad but its true  ppl r like that..*hugs to u* im glad youve descovered that its not u nemore! great job! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the poem, and the message is a great one to spread. We should all be trying to make friends with these people. It doesn't hurt too much to go say hi and make everyone feel important. Good job on the poem, thanks for sahring it. "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is such an emotional piece. I'm really glad you shared this with us. Keep working on form; your words are definetly there! so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
I liked this, I thought it was very well written. Always smile at those kids, you never know what their feeling inside. :o) ~ab~ *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a great poem!! i LOVED it!! I always talk to everyone..especially those kids that seem alone because i know if i were in their situation i'd want someone to do the same thing for me...thanks for writing about this!! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is touching, I do hope that you say "hi" to these people yourself. I know how it can be to be the one nobody wishes to talk to.  Nice work, Cody. Very sad... but one of my favourites of yours. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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takemeawaytoday Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 13Missouri |
I thought the poem was awesome. I've know a lot of people like that and I really try to let them know that someone does care about them and wants to be their friend. Usually that's me wanting to accept them. Jen |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I have often felt like this aswell. I hope things improve.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I see people like "the boy so lonely" wandering the halls of school every day, and I always feel really bad..This poem is so sad and, after reading it, I think I'm going to take the time and talk 2 one of these ppl taht are just so lonely...Really great job, I enjoyed this alot. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I guess this is something that a lot wuld be able to relate to. You did an awesome job writing this. keep it up and keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwww....personally..ive always been the one to walk around looking for people to talk to...and its usually ppl who are by themselves....so yeah im a good girly.. ..i liked this poem a lot lot!...i can so relate!!...cept with the gender part hehehe..good job on this one though.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwww....personally..ive always been the one to walk around looking for people to talk to...and its usually ppl who are by themselves....so yeah im a good girly.. ..i liked this poem a lot lot!...i can so relate!!...cept with the gender part hehehe..good job on this one though.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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