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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
I know this makes no sense but I just put a bunch of crap down. Life Living Slowly wasting away from birth You become less pure by the day the futility of your fake life is a waste look at the clock, don't kill your life realize that death walks closer to you does the passing of time make you nervous? Will your happiness outnumber your regrets Life is an interruption of nonexistance Does it ever squelch what you are? Life steals, kills, and destroys... Do you really mean "I'm going to kill you"? Does it even matter? Can you hear it? It's always there Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
never is something you have wrote consider "crap"...and never think like that cuz your poems are written from you form your heart and that is not considered "crap" its your soul and the poem was nice...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
tsk tsk u doodie hed!!!!!!! this aints no crap and stuffish u dork grrrrrs@ ewoksters  loves ya best friend best friendslols i liked this:P but u alreadys knows that cuz i tolds ya last nites  but here yas gos *bumps* lols tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is totally not crap! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very expressive poem this is actually amazing keep it up and keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I swear....yuo kids are coming up with the lines that rock the most... "Life is an interruption of nonexistance" Very impressive. I enjoyed the poem too.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
your right ewok it is crap everythuing you do is crap you SUCK just kidding very cool poem man kep it up love ya like a bro ben i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it |
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