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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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0 posted 2001-05-11 07:55 PM


I know this makes no sense but I just put a bunch of crap down.
Life
Living

Slowly wasting away from birth
You become less pure by the day
the futility of your fake life is a waste
look at the clock, don't kill your life
realize that death walks closer to you
does the passing of time make you nervous?

Will your happiness outnumber your regrets
Life is an interruption of nonexistance
Does it ever squelch what you are?
Life steals, kills, and destroys...
Do you really mean "I'm going to kill you"?
Does it even matter?
Can you hear it?
It's always there

Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually...

Why do people remind me of vacuums?

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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-11 10:05 PM


never is something you have wrote consider "crap"...and never think like that cuz your poems are written from you form your heart and that is not considered "crap" its your soul and the poem was nice...keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision
2 posted 2001-05-12 12:23 PM


tsk tsk u doodie hed!!!!!!! this aints no crap and stuffish u dork grrrrrs@ ewoksters
loves ya best friend best friends
lols i liked this:P but u alreadys knows that cuz i tolds ya last nites but here yas gos *bumps* lols
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"u say i only here wut i want too..."

obscurity of cloud
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3 posted 2001-05-12 01:53 PM


This is totally not crap!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Acies
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4 posted 2001-05-14 06:17 PM


very expressive poem
this is actually amazing
keep it up
and keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-05-18 03:13 PM


I swear....yuo kids are coming up with the lines that rock the most...

"Life is an interruption of nonexistance"
Very impressive.

I enjoyed the poem too.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19
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6 posted 2001-05-18 03:19 PM


your right ewok it is crap everythuing you do is crap you SUCK
just kidding very cool poem man kep it up love ya like a bro

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

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