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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
Rage is a powerful thing. That can sometimes have an burning sting. I have Rage. That's why I wrote this page! It builds in your head, it can sometimes turn you from living to dead. It starts as a small seed, then it slowly begins to feed. It feeds on your mind, and it begins to settle and bind. It wraps around your soul, it makes you pay the toll. The toll of pain, it's enough to make anyone go insane. You first go through hell, as if you were put in your own little padded cell. The pain becomes so great, you think that this may be your solem fate. It tears at your heart, until there's only what there was from the start. Only the cold and empty stone that he left there, you think it'll never end so you say a little prayer.. i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack [This message has been edited by Terryloveiris_85 (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is also a emotion i struggle to much for words to say and you have shown it in this poem quite well..i liked it...keep writing..  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you can't go wrong by saying a prayer.  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ahh...I liked this lots. Stay in control. ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This one's cool. The imagery in it and the rhythm in different parts are really good. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
rage.... i rage a lot... This was a great poem, very powerful. great work Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
whoa.....powerful muchs lol i enjoyed this! thought u dids a very good job on this  cant wait to c mores! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on the poem "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
I really liked this one. i know the struggle with rage as well. and it aint easy.but anyways great job on the poem. i'm puttin it in my library It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Control that rage Sometimes it's not bad to release all the hurt in us Excellent poem keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. Once i saw it was about rage i got mad...and i started reading it like i was in a rage and......yea i got into character. I really thought you did well!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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