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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i wait in anticipation looking...waiting so impatient nervous...scared i have to beat you theres no other way i have to get there first why do grades have to come in the mail? “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
lol*tiff ha ha --- you shouldn't have to worry  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Heh..... this is great! All the best humour in poetry is built up to and suddenly twisted in the end into a laugh... you did this excellently. Very cute, Tiffer. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
giggle giggle. yay, you made me smile and i really haven't felt like smiling at all recently. thank you for posting this  Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hehe...i thought this was a very enjoyable read...thanks brought me a smile...when i needed it...thansk again...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
lol! That was great. I can relate to that one. In fact, I should be watching the mail... I think they're sent out soon.  Anyway, that made me laugh. Very cool. - Cody - |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
hahahahaha this is cool! katie if you don't let them in they can't see the real you |
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Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
Nice one! Very cheeky, I like it. heh heh heh <-- Still chuckling!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ROFLMAO! Oh Tiffy girl.....you sound like me when I was in school LOL too funny.....I can SOOOO relate |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh yea... I understand this one....LOL Nice job! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I liked the beginning of it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Lol I know this feeling too :P Good wun Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually... |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Lucky me, my grades dont come in the mail. Cute poem! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hi...don't mind me...was just in here foraging again and thought this was adorable! I love your sense of humor! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
oh i remeber when i got there first and trew them away lol but now that i dropped out i don't have to worry bout grades anymore. robin  look tiff i got my own thing now aren't ou proud *lols* I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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