Teen Poetry #4 |
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Celebi Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 17 |
When he walks down the hall, I turn red When I see him on the street, I sigh and say " hes so cute" But when I talk to him on aol, I laugh, And he is my friend ~Celebi~ |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
not that good as a poem..but its the truth you totally are diff from who you are in rreal life hehe i can talk my heart away on the puter *KiMMiE* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ahhh i know what its like...good luck girl |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
People are usually a lot less shy online and on the computer, i hope you can talk to him in person and i hope everything works out for you. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Does he know at all? Maybe you should tell him "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I think the concept behind the poem is excellent and with a little work you could improve having said that what do i know? Anyway i totally agree talking online is so much easier in real life although it cannot replace real life and there is something about not being able to look into the persons eyes when you are talking to them that make the web a poor susbtitute. Anyway nuff said Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is so cute....I liked this....and yea, you should tell him |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awwww this was sweet. you should tell him hun. *hugs* good luck with this. tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'll agree talking online is a lot easier than in person... offline I'm very introverted, but as you all know online I talk to everyone all the time. It's strange how we can change like this so easily, isn't it? ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty simple in style....I thought it was ok. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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