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orckiller
New Member

since 2001-05-03

Posts 3

0 posted 2001-05-10 03:30 PM

warrior
as i look around
i see everyone
in there armor as i
with my sword and shield in hand
as i look forward
i see the sun
then i think
this battle may mean
the last of us all
but like the rest
i have faith
in my sword and partners
that we will preveil
over the rest

tell me what u think

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2001-05-10 03:37 PM

~WELCOME TO PASSIONS~

:smoking:

Everyone at Passions welcomes you!!!!!!
Anyways, about your poem. It's pretty good for a first post. Is that the style you always use??? Can't wait to read more.
Hugs,
Allysa

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-10 03:41 PM

Welcome!

Please check your email for a special greeting!

SEA

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2001-05-10 03:57 PM

okay, so one of my smilies didn't work. Sorry typo. Here:

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-10 03:59 PM

ummm...^LOL!!

and the poem was a great first post...hope to see more and welcome to passions

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-05-10 05:37 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

I really hope you like it here and i look forward to reading more of your work so please keep em coming!! Welcome again

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-05-10 06:18 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

This is a good first post, hope you stick around!

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-05-10 08:29 PM

Welcome to Passions
This first post of yours produced a stong image in my mind, nice job. I hope to see more from you and I hope you enjoy it here.

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

8 posted 2001-05-11 08:27 AM

Welcome to Passions!!

this is a great first post, i really liked the style you used in this. i know you're going to love it here at passions and i hope you stay around for a long time. i look forward to reading lots more of your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

9 posted 2001-05-11 08:36 AM

Welcome to passions and a great first post looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

10 posted 2001-05-11 11:17 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

great first post! keep em comins!!!!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-11-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

11 posted 2001-05-11 05:21 PM

I like the verticality of this poem, it made it flow well.
I also like your screen name, it reminded me of Dungeons and Dragons, and in a way so did the poem.

I love writing with that sort of a theme to it.
Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I hope you enjoy reading, replying and sharing with the rest of us here!

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

12 posted 2001-05-16 03:31 AM

Very well done. I enjoyed your first post.
I hope you enjoy your stay here in Passions and I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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