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Teen Poetry #4

I See You

Celebi
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 17

0 posted 2001-05-10 08:34 PM

When I look into the night,
I see you

When I see a sunset,
I see you

When I see the sea,
I see you

I see you everywhere,
Every place,
In every dream I have...

I See You

~Celebi~

Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

1 posted 2001-05-10 08:35 PM

this was the first i've read of yours and i'm ompressed
~IRIS

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

I don't know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to p

Celebi
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 17

2 posted 2001-05-10 08:40 PM

I actually have posted a few but I havent posted for a while so you probally havent seen my others

~Celebi~

[This message has been edited by Celebi (edited 05-10-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-05-12 11:50 PM

This was a short but meaningful post. thanks for sharing again. keep it up

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-13 01:25 AM

i liked the way youw rote what you were trying to say...i liked it and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-16 04:05 AM

Well gee, that person is everywhere!
RUN!!!!

No well....I enjoyed the poem. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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