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pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-05-09 10:40 PM

STARS
under
CLOUDS
over
STONES
under
FLESH
protect this feeble heart

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-05-10 12:06 PM

Do you want to title this or anything? If you decide to I would suggest something to do with "weaving," that's what it made me think of.
Interesting poem... I hope to see you around here more.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-10 03:19 AM

very different...to understand what you were trying to say ..hmm..i liked it..thanks for sharing..and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-10 10:48 AM

very creatively done, this was a really interesting read. i look forward to reading lots more from you in the future

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

4 posted 2001-05-10 11:32 PM

thanx for your responses..i've been absent from the forums for a long time (too long) thanx for the idea about the title...i like it...

me

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-05-12 05:40 PM

very intersting style of writing
much appreciated read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-16 06:35 PM

Very interesting!
I liked it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

7 posted 2001-05-17 09:56 AM

This was very short, obviously, but it was still well written.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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8 posted 2001-05-17 11:05 AM

This is a really neat way to phrase your words. I'm on a short poem kick now, so i really like this one. Keep posting!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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