Understanding through pain

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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

0 posted 2001-05-09 09:50 PM

(aboutz my friend ben not that good but here it is)

A river of pain runs in your soul
Twin o the one in mine
A true understanding of pain
You see the light my soul holds
As I can see yours
But pain holds an understanding
Those who hold it know

A true understanding of friendship
Totally selfless for your friends
A friendship i will cherish until I die
You see my pain and you hold my hand
I turn my head up to see you
And i begin to cry
You cry too
Its ok

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-05-09 11:59 PM

I like the last line a lot. Two simple words that can be taken many different ways in the context you put it into... it allows a lot of free interperetation.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2001-05-10 02:35 AM

i love u

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-10 02:49 AM

this was a nice tribute..thanks for sharing and keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-05-12 12:29 PM

I don't agree with you
I think this is really good
very heart felt poem
the last lines are marvelous

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-16 03:49 AM

well done....the reassurance of having a friend who understands is all you really need sometimes...

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-05-16 04:54 AM

Not that good? Ha! That's a joke. It is so nice. The last few lines really made me smile. Your opener was fanastic.

Keep 'em coming.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

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