the box - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-09 07:07 PM

i put my feelings in a box
the box that is 'us'
i keep giving and giving
till ive filled that box up
but when ever i go to it
it always seems empty
i never find the feelings
that your supposed to put in
i give and you take
always never ending

i put my feelings in a box
the box that is 'us'
the box that is always empty

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-09-2001).]

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-09 07:13 PM

Wow Tiffz. This is my fav by you. I like it alot. *hugs* GREAT JOB

Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on.....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-09 07:36 PM

Tiffy girl, this is so sad...email me if you ever want to talk -k-

SEA

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

3 posted 2001-05-09 07:48 PM

great poem, so much meaning... hey, did you check if there is a hole in your box? could be the reason.. j/p

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-05-09 09:30 PM

Good job on the poem! Make sure you peek in the box every now and then...

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

5 posted 2001-05-09 09:52 PM

heyz tifferz that was awesome. u r so awesome me liked that poem. i know tuns of people love u back for all the love u give out

love ya tifferz from me

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-10 03:35 AM

i enjoyed this poem...nice job...keep writin...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-05-10 11:06 AM

this is sad, but you create a really excellent image in the box. i liked the theme of this a lot. always enkoy reading your work, keep posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-12 05:58 PM

This is a tough situation to be in. Just be strong and keep your head up.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-05-16 05:53 PM

Very sad poem. I hope thigns improve. I did like this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.