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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2001-01-22 04:47 PM

Feeling insecure,
Ovewhelming sadness grows.
Deep within a circle of faces,
Yet, still outside in shallow water.

Inside this great mass of people,
And still an outsider...
To think you're sitting on the moon,
In reality, only peering above from Earth.

Caught in this black hole of chaos,
Yet, forever brushed aside.
What was thought to be your world,
Now, nothing but a fable.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-01-22 05:59 PM

hey Jenn
I was wondering why you would make you write a poem so sad?
Nobody has to feel like this
I hope i'm just misreading your poem
stay strong...ok?
you know we in passions luv ya

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

The Lost Supertone
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 74
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

2 posted 2001-01-22 06:09 PM

Well written poem.
I could really relate to it.
Thank you for allowing me the privilage.

if you have AIM or ICQ I would love to talk.
my AIm name is TheLostSupertone

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-22 06:12 PM

You seem to be goign through a rough time here Jenn. Hope things start to clear up for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-01-22 09:06 PM

I'll be ok.

Thanks for the concern.

And thanks for reading.
And, sorry.... I don't have either one anymore (AOL, ICQ)
xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-01-23 03:54 AM

Jean, I have not read much of your work (yes I am giving myself a beating for it..heh) but from what I have read this is powerful stuff. I hope things do look up for you. Living life feeling down is never a good thing to have to ordeal.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

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