Teen Poetry #4 |
Hunter of rainbows |
sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
Totally apart from the world Trying to make a stronger connection Looking for somthing worthwhile Hunting for friends That make life all that much more better Makes all the pain you go through... worth it People who understand you People you understand Someone who is willing to put their trust in you Someone you can trust too A person who won't run While you are bleeding in the street Or stop to tell you why... Who will hold your hand Hunter of rainbows A search of true friendship That make life worthwhile Hunter of rainbows I'll be 'till I die as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
cool post.. liked it alot! $ Jeff $ : ) |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work. I like the idea of "hunter of rainbows." What a well-organized thought you had right there. Keep on sharing with us, Scarlet. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very good job...on the poem...i thought you did qutie well..on this..keep writing ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i like the title of this and i like the concept behind this piece. you did a great job on this, keep posting all your writing. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This title reall caught my attention. 'Hunter of Rainbows' is so unique. Kudos on that. The piece itself is very nice. If it was written for someone specific, that person should be lucky. Thanks for the read. It's going to the library. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
For some reason i felt such calmness and gentleness on this one. Thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You did great on this one. I enjoyed it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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