Teen Poetry #4 |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
In this harsh world know one thing its true Know that I will always love you In this thy crule world belive this is ture That I do so dearly care for you. When this crule world has you down, then think of these words that I say to you "I truly love you!" -- Linc I am not going to be on piptalk for a while I have SOLs and I have to pass!!! I hope to be back in a week. I will be on every once in a while (I hope) Okay talk to you guys later oh and congrates dopy!!! oh and I don't really care for this one too much but since I needed to tell people I was going to be gone for a while I figured I would post it. "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
GOOD LUCK! im sure youll do fine..and it wasnt a bad poem *KiMMiE* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice job, Linc! A love poem, well this is a cute change of pace for you. Come to think of it, a poem is a cute change of pace for you. Best of luck to you, you'll do supafine! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on the poem... and i'll miss you and write some poems while you gone.. and much luck to you.. ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Hahaha guys I just took my first test, and I think I did "superfine" thanks for the praise and good luck(s). I will try to write more but you know I don't know *shrug*. To Allan ha I know I need to post more but you know it's funnier to read others work. Talk to you all later and thanks again for the comments it means a lot to me (OH MY GOD I JUST NOTICED I HAVE BEEN SPELLING MASTERPIECE WRONG!!!) -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." [This message has been edited by Linc (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Linc, my friend, i have missed you around here, hope you start posting regularly again soon. i've missed your input on the things i've posted anyway, good luck with all your tests, and great job on this piece. i always enjoy reading your poetry. cya later man. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Thanks Linc, you will be missed! Well done on the poem, but it's not your best. I know you'll come back with some pretty great stuff and I'm looking forward to that! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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