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Linc
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0 posted 2001-05-07 06:28 PM


In this harsh world know
one thing its true
Know that I will
always love you

In this thy crule world
belive this is ture
That I do so dearly
care for you.

When this crule world has you down,
then think of these words
that I say to you
"I truly love you!"

             -- Linc

    I am not going to be on piptalk for a while I have SOLs and I have to pass!!! I hope to be back in a week. I will be on every once in a while (I hope) Okay talk to you guys later oh and congrates dopy!!! oh and I don't really care for this one too much but since I needed to tell people I was going to be gone for a while I figured I would post it.

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

© Copyright 2001 Jermaine Clayborne - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-07 07:24 PM


GOOD LUCK!   im sure youll do fine..and it wasnt a bad poem
         *KiMMiE*

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2 posted 2001-05-07 11:03 PM


Nice job, Linc!  A love poem, well this is a cute change of pace for you.  
Come to think of it, a poem is a cute change of pace for you.  
Best of luck to you, you'll do supafine!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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3 posted 2001-05-07 11:32 PM


great job on the poem...
and i'll miss you and write some poems while you gone..
and much luck to you..

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Linc
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4 posted 2001-05-08 11:39 AM


Hey,

     Hahaha guys I just took my first test, and I think I did "superfine" thanks for the praise and good luck(s). I will try to write more but you know I don't know *shrug*. To Allan ha I know I need to post more but you know it's funnier to read others work. Talk to you all later and thanks again for the comments it means a lot to me (OH MY GOD I JUST NOTICED I HAVE BEEN SPELLING MASTERPIECE WRONG!!!)

                         -- Linc


"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 05-08-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-05-08 12:40 PM


Linc, my friend, i have missed you around here, hope you start posting regularly again soon.  i've missed your input on the things i've posted    anyway, good luck with all your tests, and great job on this piece.  i always enjoy reading your poetry.  cya later man.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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6 posted 2001-05-15 03:18 AM


Thanks Linc, you will be missed!
Well done on the poem, but it's not your best. I know you'll come back with some pretty great stuff and I'm looking forward to that!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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