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artemis_selene
Junior Member

since 2001-05-07

Posts 14
virginia

0 posted 2001-05-08 08:55 PM

the letter i never sent
had your name on the back
it was folded up into a square
and sealed up with a tack

it said three simple words
what they were you will never know
because they betrayed my feelings
which I can't allow myself to show

when i wrote those three words
and saw them on the page in black
i knew that if i sent it
i would never get it back.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-08 08:59 PM

this is a sad situation to be in...i hope everythings alright...and i bet you someone will take to as you are..no worries and keep your head up...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-05-08 09:04 PM

oh my!!!!
could it be possible that two ppl in the whole entire world have done the exact same thing?????
ive still got the letter..i dont know why i havent thrown it out...oh well i know how yer feeling then..things'll get better you watch!
cant wait to hear more from you!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

artemis_selene
Junior Member

since 2001-05-07

Posts 14
virginia

3 posted 2001-05-08 09:06 PM

thanks guys! just so you know, i'm OK. i had a little moment there.

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

4 posted 2001-05-08 09:24 PM

i know the feeling of saying i luv you and not hearing it back..feel better...and good poem btw!
*KiMMiE*

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-09 11:24 AM

this is really powerful writing, i like this a lot! i thought you did an excellent job expressing yourself and the ending really hit me hard. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

6 posted 2001-05-09 03:39 PM

I think you did a great job and i enjoyed it. keep up the great work and hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-05-09 08:57 PM

I think the last statement has a lot of power in its real meaning, and its creative wording. "I'd never get it back" takes a minute to fully click. I like that.

I sincerely hope all gets better for you.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-11 06:10 PM

Ouch!!! Glad to sea you say you're ok though. Keep your head up always. I love your poem a lot. thanks for sharing it

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-05-16 03:34 PM

well done on this one! I really liked the way it was written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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