Teen Poetry #4 |
the letter |
artemis_selene Junior Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 14virginia |
the letter i never sent had your name on the back it was folded up into a square and sealed up with a tack it said three simple words what they were you will never know because they betrayed my feelings which I can't allow myself to show when i wrote those three words and saw them on the page in black i knew that if i sent it i would never get it back. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is a sad situation to be in...i hope everythings alright...and i bet you someone will take to as you are..no worries and keep your head up... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
oh my!!!! could it be possible that two ppl in the whole entire world have done the exact same thing????? ive still got the letter..i dont know why i havent thrown it out...oh well i know how yer feeling then..things'll get better you watch! cant wait to hear more from you! "Life is not long and boring, |
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artemis_selene Junior Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 14virginia |
thanks guys! just so you know, i'm OK. i had a little moment there. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i know the feeling of saying i luv you and not hearing it back..feel better...and good poem btw! *KiMMiE* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is really powerful writing, i like this a lot! i thought you did an excellent job expressing yourself and the ending really hit me hard. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think you did a great job and i enjoyed it. keep up the great work and hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I think the last statement has a lot of power in its real meaning, and its creative wording. "I'd never get it back" takes a minute to fully click. I like that. I sincerely hope all gets better for you. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ouch!!! Glad to sea you say you're ok though. Keep your head up always. I love your poem a lot. thanks for sharing it "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well done on this one! I really liked the way it was written. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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