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Prom Night |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Prom Night May 5, 2001 ~~~~~~~~~~~ Long brown hair In a pile of curls On top of my head Long, sparkly blue dress Touching the floor Followed by a train My date’s black tux Was soon covered in glitter Just like all my friends A few candid snapshots To remember the night Forever etched in tyme A dance with him A touch of the lips Hanging out with friends Photos taken Laughter Forever in the past Prom night Just a memory With photographs [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
wow! your prom sounded awesome!! hope u had lots and lots of fun!! amzing imagery. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i cant wait till my prom..it sounds like fun..but photographs arnt all you have..you have memories too  *KiMMiE* |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Wow very good. I think you did a great job and hope to read more. Keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I hope you had fun, Tamma! I'm sure you were the prettiest girl there!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I'm getting the film developed this weekend, and I'm hoping to get them put on a disk so I can post my favs on here And Guess what Y'all? It wasn't a prep that got Prom Queen, it was a little disabled girl. She really deserved it Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Pretty, very pretty. Jenn "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you pictured this so nicely..great job and i really liked the way you wrote this out..great job and keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
great poem Tamma. I'm glad you had a GREAT prom. We (aka: my junior high) had a dance on the 4th, which was okay, but this guy I thought I liked turned out to be mean. Anyways, great job. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
it sounds like you had a great time, i'm glad to hear it. oh, and nice poem by the way, the imagery in it was really excellent. keep posting Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Tamma, you have outdone all the other poems you have written before this one. This is awesome. keep it up girl "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how this poem was set up in short stanzas, great job on it. Glad to here prom went all right and please do show some pictures! "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem. My prom is on friday....curse it....curse prom! Ahhhhh!!!! Anyway......well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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