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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Wouldn't it be wonderful * Escape your fantasy * Vision of wonder * View your soul out of control and floundering about in the real world of funds And confusion, where every minute detail counts! I @@ I ME I ME I $$ I $$ I $$ I $$ I ME I ME I ME I @@ Where do you want to strike terror into the mass of fools today? Remember the trial rememberTIME "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
..ok....*whooooooooooooooooooosh!*.....i hate to admit it but i need an explaination buddy.... "Life is not long and boring, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Not only over my head.... but I don't think I even saw it coming! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Uhh......  Explanation please? I'm also not quite clever enough to pick this up... |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Dang!!! Sorry about that. This was supposed to look like a computer screen, but it turned out wrong. This was an abstract poem portraying various ideals and dreams in the computer world. I wrote it when I was kinda sleepy, so I can't really quite remember what the heck it was supposed to mean entirely. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
That didn't work out too well did it frac? Oh well....I liked the explanation hehe.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the explanation helped there..haha hey but..its interesting on how you be doing your poetry...and what you try to say to the readers...anyways tho...keep writing...  ...?[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sometimes it helps to be late in reading cause it helps when the writer already has an explanation already written.  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
fractal i thought you might be interested to hear my response...when i read this, i thought this was a poem about abandoning monetary pursuits and finding your inner self.... oh well |
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