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Teen Poetry #4

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pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-05-23 10:45 PM

eNDLeSSLY GRiM
TaTTeReD FaCeS
iNHuMaN CoNCReTe NiGHTMaReS
of FoRCeS ReLeaSeD

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-23 10:57 PM

I'm going to be honest. I'm an idiot, and this went completely over my pathetic little head. I like obscure stuff though and only capitalizing the consonants was pure brilliance.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-24 12:53 PM

i think u should keep the letters in one size...LOL

...hehe...other then that this was pretty deep if u wnet into what the meaning wa s about...graet job and thansk for the read...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-24 03:51 AM

I actually felt that having the consonants in caps had some deep meaning....it flew over me tho.....anyway, I really feel you're coming out with this great style of writing. REally great stuff....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-05-24 07:45 AM

I liked the letters in all different sizes cuz it looked unique that way. Short and sweet. I had to read it a few times to get the full meaning but i liked it a lot.

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