Teen Poetry #4 |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
Don’t tell them where I hide Don’t tell them where I go Just let me hide in this little cove I just want die I don’t want to breath I don’t want to see All the pain in me Just let me hide Escape this evil prize Help me baby please Help me i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
hey as u know i'm more then happy to listen to u ben and u better not die dork butt talk latterz okie from me scarlet as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs* i love you ben “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*group hugs* I love all of you. (is trying to make up for Javier's absence) Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is incredible, the emotion in this piece is really breathtaking, i like this piece a lot. group hugs are the best, i'm joining in great job on this, keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
that was great ben.. *hugs* |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Love you Ben, keep your head up hun. *hugs forever* |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i know that feeling all to weel..just think of the good things ya have..even if thjere arnt many,...they are still thnere..and those r the things that matter!!! *KiMMiE* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sounds like a cry for help. I hope everything is ok Ben....You can talk to me if you'd like I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I just want die I don’t want to breath I don’t want to see All the pain in me I thought those for lines were incredibly strong but yet so wonderfully expressed. ::Hugs:: hun...stay strong |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hang in there be strong my friend just remember, we'll always be here for ya I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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