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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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The Zu. Past the lion and the tiger, See the swimming antelope Past the tion and the liger, Look through the periscope, Underneath the chimpanzee, Over by the chimpanzoo, Where monkies are roaming free, They dance and sing for you, Over by the juggling llama, The crowds trapped in a cage, Come on and watch the drama, They’re howling out in rage, Sit atop a crocodile, He will take you for a ride, Wonder at his welcome smile, Don’t rock, he’ll have your hide, Slide down by the penguins, Stop and have a swim, Becareful of the fins, We have a shark called Jim, Take a cloud and reach the sky, Float on into the blue, Don’t look down you’ll learn to fly, Welcome to the Zu. Well my 500th post and everyone enjoyable... i've enjoyed my time here and hope to get as much out of pip in the future... anyway 500 its pretty special to me so i'm gonna have a moment... Zu |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow a senior member now....stop by the sanctuary!!! And Zu, this poem rocked. I really felt you did an amazing job on this poem. It's a fun read, but really well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
after reading the poem...(looking like a little kid at the candy stores sees)....yummmmy  ...this poem was great and i enjoyed every verse i eman EVERY..though and all...but i'm all hungry!...grrr...keep writing and no more poems on animals!  ...*goes and grabs a chicken*...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-24-2001).] |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
loved it. all i can say. ~IRIS  i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow...we had cameo appearences by the penguin and the crock!!...alberta stop licking your lips man!!.. congrates on the 501th post andrew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOO!! the poem was great...i liked it a lot.. "Life is not long and boring, |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Congrats Zu! This was actually quite good. Even though this was kinda a off the wall non-serious poem the rhythm to this poem was exellent. Very well done emperor. *bows in respect* Jason
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is so cool. i love it. katie if you don't let them in they can't see the real you |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
heehee, late for yet another one of Zu's great poems. why am I late this time? cuz when you posted it I wasn't really paying attention to what was being posted...I was a bad little girl... oh well, it's great, and I luved it. yep, let's *bump* another!! (poem I mean, pervert) heehee Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Stace, you're not the only one.  Congrats on the big 5-0-0...Even if it was ages ago. A bit of light reading is always needed in here and you have provided it in the most interesting piece. Thanks for a great read, zu. Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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