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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Pain Pain Why do I feel it? Why must I feel it towards you? Why do you make me so angry? Why must you cause me so much pain? Pain Why do I feel it? Why would I feel it toward you? Why are you making me so angry? Why don’t you know how you hurt me? Pain Why do I feel it? Why can’t I stop feeling it? Why do you cause me so much stress? Why can’t you care enough to think of this? Pain Why do I feel it? Why would I feel it towards my best friend? Why would my best friend make me so angry? Why does my best friend cause me so much pain? _____________________________________ OK is this a big taboo if they delet my post? cause well it's not here, and I can't even read teh replys I got! I mean I went to a meeting at our church. Come home thinking "Hey I might have gotten some really good replys about that one" I mean I dont' feel that way any more so it's not like I would even be mad if someone called me and idiot and sugggested I go through with it or what ever... espeicaly since there was nothing to go through with... Anyway... I am not angry at the moderators for deleting it... although it did mean a lot to me... but anyway. I can understnad. And if this is a big taboo (you know posting after your post has been deleted) then feel free to delet this one and I can just post it again some other time hehe And not to worry I won't try posting the other one under anohter name. I'm not that kinda person I guess I should let you guys respond to my post... BUT DO YOU REMEBER IT! you might wanna re read it so it's fresh again hahaha. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
hhhh.... Can't say I understand. Don't see Y this would have been deleted. I liked it. it convays a great sense desperation. However if it was deleted by a moderator, I'm sure it was done for good reason and you should respect that no matter how much you disagree. But in my eyes, GREAT POEM ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Not this poem, no no no, it was another one. I wouldn't post it again. no no no... I'ma good little poster |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
ohhh.. sorry. Mis-understood. Ok then I chnge my reply to simply GREAT POEM!!!!  "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
pfffffffffffffff shesh! hahaha But yeah the other one was aksing God to kill me, so I can kinda understnad why some of them might have felt it was not good. I wasn't sure if they would, but now I kinda know not to post ones like that. But yeah thanks for the reply |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You write in question form hehe. You have a lot of unsolved questions in your mind. Hope you find them out.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
But if I spoke in awnsers then I wouldn't be able to be a furture jepordy champion |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You really hit the story of my life right on the nose with this poem. I really loved it and its kinda ironic to think that someone who is your best friend could do these things to you but i guess it happens. Great poem hun! |
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