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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2001-01-26 01:51 AM

I have walked these lands many times over,
My hand stained with death,
Yet I AM A HERO with no regrets,
I laugh at that unfunny thought.

A hero they made me to be,
All I wanted was just to be free,
Sitting behind endless prison bars,
Just gathering with thoughts while looking at the stars,

Why is life the price of death,
I have walk this earth a long long time,
long enough to put togther this ryhm.

Early I watch as my love rolled out of bed,
But look at the time forceing itself among us,
Yes I loved my wife but now she is dead,
Just like all other people or so I have read,

Laying down for one last time,
With my sword in my chest my last goodbye,
Should I have the fight this time again the demon of death,
Oh well my life will be his last theifth.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Fearless_Angel
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

1 posted 2001-01-26 12:59 PM

Hey there:
Wow! That is a beautifully written sad poem. It full of feelings and its got a deep meaning. Sometimes, I think that too because of my depresssion, "If life is a gift then why does it get taken away?" It's a dumb question but to me it makes sense when I'm fighting to keep myself here. Anyways, hope you have time to check out my poem, Nightfall. Thankz and keep writing aiights?

Lotsa Love,
Angel
xoxoxo

Fearless_Angel
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

2 posted 2001-01-26 01:00 PM

Hey there:
Wow! That is a beautifully written sad poem. It full of feelings and its got a deep meaning. Sometimes, I think that too because of my depresssion, "If life is a gift then why does it get taken away?" It's a dumb question but to me it makes sense when I'm fighting to keep myself here. Anyways, hope you have time to check out my poem, Nightfall. Thankz and keep writing aiights?

Lotsa Love,
Angel
xoxoxo

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-26 02:35 PM

this is definitely a sad piece.
life? you never know what it has in store for you
seems like it has all these bag of tricks
keep strong
beautiful write

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-01-26 02:38 PM

Hey bro! Once again you have wrote a wonderful peice. Keep up the good work.
love ya lots!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-26 05:36 PM

Angel liked it so much she posed twice hehe.

Nice one here jytree........I see your improvement from before. It's amazing.
You did good on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

6 posted 2001-01-26 08:48 PM

yes she did dopey lol,
Thanks I am glad you liked it
all I can say is I try!

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

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