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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
Cold from this world All alone in her sorrow Scared to let anyone in Angry this is the life she leads For her heart is frozen She was raised by deseption and lies At such a young age learned every man for himself She doesn't know how to trust people Others can only see her as cold hearted and mean They can't see a heart filled with sorrow Looking in all the wrong places Pushing all who could care away They wouldn't understand Hurt them before they hurt me i win that way right? She looks at life in a tainted view She is the kid who laughed at your strenghth All she wanted was to have the same thing You said she would get hers in the end She was the girl who reached out to you Then shattered your heart with a grin Cold hearted and mean... Heart filled with sorrow and bleeding within Will anyone warm her soul? Teach her what love is? [This message has been edited by sleepymoongirl (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
whoa! liked this one toos...tis sayads but also makes me wants to beats up that bianca!  She was the girl who reached out to you Then shattered your heart with a grin ^ likes thats *points tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey Scarlet, I really like this one! The ending has a certain abruptness about it that makes the message very strong somehow. Great work! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
i love you scarlet *super duper big love filled hug that makes scarlet feel all better* keep it up hun and talk to me when ya get online we havent really chatted in a bit *sniff* i miss scarlet  bye ben i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Powerful poem, Scarlet! Another job very nicely done. Good job. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow this is really good i like the end awsome job *KiMMiE* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow.....this was really great. I am liking your poetry. Very well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
loved it...what more could I say? it's really great... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*applauds*~ you did really good simply beautiful keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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