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Faces_Of_Death New Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 2Heaven's Parking Lot |
One short moment. I saw you today For one too short moment. I couldn’t just stare at you Until all the loneliness and pain Of the time spent without you was gone. I couldn’t take time to notice What you were wearing, Or whether your hair had grown. One short moment – I could only smile in passing, As if I see you every day, As if I never loved you. One short moment That makes one long life worth living. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awwws i likes that alot! was sweet yet saddish. newayz! WELCOMES TO PASSIONS  ur gonna loves it heres!!!!!!!! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
welCOME TO PASSions.. and this was a nice first post... i thought you explained the situation of which you were discribing well.. keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done! I enjoyed your first post and i hope to see more in the future! check your e-mail for a special message!! Dopey_Dope/Mod  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I liked it a lot. It was really powerful in it's own way. Keep up the great writing. ~First they tell you, you can’t sleep alone in a strange place, then they tell you, you can’t sleep with somebody else~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Welcome to Passions!! Yeah I liked this...it was pretty good.  Good stuff, good stuff. Hope to see ya round more! Oh and....man your icon completely freaks me out...  ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
glad to c that im not the only one sceered of clowns  lol@javier already showin off his new 'powers' i think im double postin......opps! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. this is so sad. Must be a very hard situation to be in. I liked it a lot though. Very nice first post You're going to like it a lot here at PIP! I hope you stay for awhile. Nice work.--Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Great First Post here... Welcome to Passions.. -Jeff  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
That's a very sweet and very sad poem at the same time. I really liked it. Welcome to Passions, hope you enjoy the stay. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This poem totally rocked my world! I liked it a LOT... it almost made me cry *LOL* Great post, I hope to see many more! *Sara* "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to Passions!! This is a greaty first post, you wrote this really well. i know you'll love it here, you have a lot of talent and you fit right in. by the way, have you seen all those faces of death videos? those things are scary. anyway, i hope to read lots more of your work in the future Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This really gave me an odd message, I completely appreciate what you are expressing. I personally love your description of the briefness of the moment, and then your magnification of its importance. That was very creative. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. Oh and don't mind Carly, there was just a dude awhile ago who used that icon that caused us some major problems. So make her some new memories. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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