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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-05-05 08:35 PM



When I'm bored, You are there
When I'm down, you are there
When I'm happy, you are there
When I laugh, you are there

When no one else is, you are there
When I am angry, you are there
When I am sad, you are there
When I was mad at You, you were there

When I thought I didn't care, you were there
When I hated you, You were there
When I realized I DID care, you were there
A friend like you, is very rare
Everytime I need you, You are there


Dedicated to my Tifferoke  

Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on.....

© Copyright 2001 Ewok Enterprise - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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1 posted 2001-05-05 08:42 PM


awwwwwwwwws *cries* thank you ewoksters thats sooo sweetish! *sniffs*      i love you ewok! ur a great friend. uve always been there for me toos!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs her ewoksters*
tiff   

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

lonely*soul
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2 posted 2001-05-05 08:44 PM


awww...thats cutish  good job
           *KiM*

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3 posted 2001-05-05 09:19 PM


Awww... this is cute. It's great to have a friend like that.

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

Smlie4u87
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4 posted 2001-05-05 10:00 PM


That is such a sweet poem, your lucky to have a friend like that.

Always,
   Trac

Angel Bee
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5 posted 2001-05-05 10:07 PM


good job. i liked this one, keep writing :o)
~ab~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

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6 posted 2001-05-06 02:54 AM


Well done, and very sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-05-06 02:56 AM


that was nice...great job on the poem..
keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

knightlyshadows
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8 posted 2001-05-06 10:24 AM


forgots to add this to me librarys!!!!
*hugs her ewoksters*
tifferoke

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

Fading Away
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9 posted 2001-05-06 01:13 PM


Wow.. lots of love poems as of lately  
This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed it.
Good job.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

Allan Riverwood
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10 posted 2001-05-06 05:26 PM


There you go again, Tiff!  
I liked this poem, Ewok!  You are a great dude!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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