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as i awake |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i wake from my slumber and get overwelmed by the thought of having to face the same things today that ive already fought i wake from my slumber only to realize the dread that i have to face another day and crawl out of bed i awake from my slumber to think bout' creul things they'll do they get off on my pain i know the truth, nothing new id like to see them all be in my shoes for one day and see if they think all my problems should go away they dont know what i feel but they sure as hell know why they are the reasons i think bout death their the reasons i must die and in the back of their minds they know that so well they just keep kicking me when im down after ive already fell its not like i matter anyways im a nobody to them all so now im waking up again and ready for another fall [This message has been edited by lonely*soul (edited 05-05-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Kimmie, honey... this is a sad poem.   Is something bothering you lately? You know you can talk to us, we're your pals, right? If you ever need anything at all you know where I can be reached, even if you just need someone to talk to.  Ok hon?Keep your chin up a bit. By the way, I enjoyed the poem quite a bit. Good work here.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you know what i'm gonna say about this poem....i loved it..hehe..i did totally relate and go thru in my times of life..thanks for sharing such touching poems to my heart...keep writing them straight forward truthful poem...cya~  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful poem, but sad. I enjoyed it and hope you get better!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I love this poem, and i can definetely relate to it, i just hope everything is ok with you. you did a wonderful job expressing your emotions in this, keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Kimmie --- stay strong girl. Don't let anyone make you feel lesser than they are. Just laugh at them, even from within. Be strong and keep ya head up OK?hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele, |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
great poem. i so totally relate. i love itValerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
breaking my heart here.....don't let mean people win.....if you need to talk....email me....I'm here....I care SEA |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ahhhh i liked it hehehe Good job hun! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
*hugs* I hope things get better for you!! I can really relate to this poem too. especially right now. I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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