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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Stomp me with your words Use my emotions against me I Care but You don't It's Great I don't want to hear your processed excuses you've worn out your friendship and now it's all good It's Great When you take the notion make sure your press that dagger further because you know how much I enjoy it It's Great Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on..... |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
all ive got to say is OUCH! but seriously..that was good, *KiM* |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i love you ewok. *hugs* i dont know what id do with out you. youve always been there for me and im sorry i hurt you. tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ouch!!! The sounds like complete tormenting...Why r u apologizing tiff?? Did you do this to him?? Tsk tsk tsk.... |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
yea kinda but it was somewhat mutual. but we be okays now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay me! *does the ewoksters and mes is friends agains dance* lols tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice work, Moe. I like the way you used the repitition. I enjoyed this, and I hope to see more from you. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww, look at those too.  Ewoksters --->  <--- TiffyIdn't it cute?  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Talk about masochistic.....i liked the poem, but hope things get better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
that so explains how i'm feeling now. boy oh boy does it hurt. i'm crying now but its me the poem was great. as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the repitition worked well..in this poem..i liked it and keep writin..  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is dark but i liked the thoughts you put in this piece. i think you did a good job on this, keep writing Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmmm...very interesting hope things have setelled "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this VERY much. You rocked this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I really liked this one. And as one of my friends once told me while describing a wreck he was in, "Its all gravy" Dont ask. *~*Amanda*~* |
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