Teen Poetry #4 |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
crystal clear perceptions of a shrouded land dark confussion reigning in impeccable innocense seen through rose-tinted glasses tailored for a hypocrite lost in glorious abandonment found in untended darkness blinded by the light that shimmers through the rose shown unbridled perfection by crystal clear perceptions “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Oh wow, Tiff, REALLY good one! I like it alot, keep it up! |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is definetely a piece for my library, you did an incredible job on this. the images are incredible and the wording truly beautiful. this is my favorite piece by you thusfar, keep writing wonderful poetry. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one. Quite deep and good. I enjoyed it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The images and descriptions in this piece are amazing! Nice work.. very nice. I enjoyed this a lot, Tiffany! --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Definitely a great post, you did a wonderful job on the descriptions. Quite the little writing talent you have there, Tiffy. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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