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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-03 05:05 PM


crystal clear perceptions
of a shrouded land
dark confussion reigning
in impeccable innocense

seen through rose-tinted glasses
tailored for a hypocrite
lost in glorious abandonment
found in untended darkness

blinded by the light
that shimmers through the rose
shown unbridled perfection
by crystal clear perceptions

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
AngelPoet87
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Indy
1 posted 2001-05-03 06:07 PM


Oh wow, Tiff, REALLY good one! I like it alot, keep it up!
banburycross
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viginia
2 posted 2001-05-03 06:18 PM


This is definetely a piece for my library, you did an incredible job on this.  the images are incredible and the wording truly beautiful.  this is my favorite piece by you thusfar, keep writing wonderful poetry.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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3 posted 2001-05-04 01:58 PM


Well done on this one. Quite deep and good. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away
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4 posted 2001-05-04 05:04 PM


The images and descriptions in this piece are amazing!  Nice work.. very nice.  I enjoyed this a lot, Tiffany!

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-05-05 02:36 AM


Definitely a great post, you did a wonderful job on the descriptions.  
Quite the little writing talent you have there, Tiffy.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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