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0 posted 2001-05-03 01:44 PM



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1 posted 2001-05-03 02:49 PM


Whoa Marie...simply beautiful piece you've created here....Wonderful wonderful wonderful....
  ~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked.  And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears."   ~Kahil Gibran

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2 posted 2001-05-03 03:18 PM


your writing is so beautiful, you put tears in my eyes baby.  i love you, thank you for writing something like this, knowing that you love me is all i need to know    you leave me breathless... *kiss*

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3 posted 2001-05-03 03:52 PM


wow!...truly a beautiful piece..
written in such lovely ways..
i enjoyed this much
definitly a piece..
that'll leave some1 breathless
if it was written for them..amazing
keep writing marie

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4 posted 2001-05-03 04:31 PM


Aww, those two are so luvvy-duvvy  
Very nice poem, Marie.  Well refined, I must say.  It has just enough meter to make it flow well, perfect breaks and spacing.  Wonderful work.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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5 posted 2001-05-04 01:57 PM


That's new info to me!
I didn't know Marie and Peter were together!!!!!!!
Geesh all these Passion couples forming (passion couples? hmmm  ) and i didn't know about it!
WEll done Marie!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

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