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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia 
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Whoa Marie...simply beautiful piece you've created here....Wonderful wonderful wonderful.... ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
your writing is so beautiful, you put tears in my eyes baby. i love you, thank you for writing something like this, knowing that you love me is all i need to know  you leave me breathless... *kiss*Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow!...truly a beautiful piece.. written in such lovely ways.. i enjoyed this much definitly a piece.. that'll leave some1 breathless if it was written for them..amazing keep writing marie  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-03-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww, those two are so luvvy-duvvy  Very nice poem, Marie. Well refined, I must say. It has just enough meter to make it flow well, perfect breaks and spacing. Wonderful work. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
That's new info to me! I didn't know Marie and Peter were together!!!!!!! Geesh all these Passion couples forming (passion couples? hmmm  ) and i didn't know about it!WEll done Marie!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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